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A collaborative piece i'm working on with
I thought I'd put this up for suggestions before the inking and colouring begins, any tiny details you can think of would help
It's the small things that make the difference =p

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:icontwoeyes:
what's he supposed to be? a samurai? what?
if this is a katana then the blade is too long, and not even on all it's parts.
the handle is wrong because swords have a round blocker right at the end of the handle to prevent your grip from sliding onto the blade, and what the hell is that round thing on his back? is that supposed to be a shield? is it the sun?? what? try to hold a long stick on your neck and shoulders, his wrist is salnted too much, it should be straight, is that sword that heavy?

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:iconsenzai:
Hehe, thanks, i didn't notice any of that ^^;
He's got one of those chinese hats on his back =p i was thinking about taking it out...
:icontwoeyes:
yeah, it looks bad, a chinese hat with a japanese sword...

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:iconsenzai:
*rice farmer hat...all rice farmers wear them =p
:icontwoeyes:
but he's not a farmer, he's a warrior. you have to decide on his background

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:iconsenzai:
well, his bio is a surprise, i was only planning on putting up his story with the completed piece...
:icontwoeyes:
you should make him perfect

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